Each n every moment passes in agitation. The pang to see you goes on increasing by each passing moment. Your face keeps flashing in my mind reminding me of the old times when you were there beside me, holding my hand assuring me by your physical presence that you are mine forever……but now I realize that all of that was a lie…… my eyes have become thirsty like the traveler in the middle of the desert. I feel like hurting myself so that the physical pain would keep me away from the pain of seperation..
Its been so long since I last saw you .It feels you are ages away. The strength has simply vanished. can’t tolerate this grief of separation …you have gone to a place where I can’t reach out to you. Every now and then I have tears in my eyes.
Waiting for you to tell me to do the next thing…I keep waiting for that touch on my hand that made my heart flutter.. My eyes keep searching your face, because my heart is still in hope that you would be back just for 5 mins so that I could see you…………tears keep leaking down my face.. U left me…your soul has departed but not your memories from my heart..
Have you ever experienced such pain?
Tanushree Srivastava 
Beautiful writing.
thank you aditya.i am glad you liked it 🙂
You are going to do well, your writing is lovely
thank you for your kind words.i am happy that you find my work worthy of reading 🙂
You have really great imagery in your writing, and you write well… Keep dreaming 🙂
thank you so much pauline.it means a lot that to me that you went through my blog.i promise to keep writing better and better 🙂
I love what you write
thanx anmol 🙂
I have, and your writing makes it sound romantic. Thanks for visiting my site and liking an article that was very different. Have a great week-end.
thank you.it was a pleasure reading your blog 🙂
Thank you. Your article inspired a conversation with my husband last night and I may blog it this morning. I’m mulling it around in my mind. Losing love is hard, but why? Why can we lose one person and it’s no big deal, and we lose someone else, and our world is shattered?
my pleasure 🙂
it is always very hard to loose the person you love because “the love” becomes like a drug for your happiness.You just stop imagining your life without that person and when one fine day when that person leaves you then you are shattered.All the happiness seems to disappear and you are left muffled and weak.
But i say,get up,brush up yourself and open your arms to a new life and a new possibility 🙂
You got it! I finished the article yours inspired this morning. Hope you enjoy it.
nice I love your style of writing
thank you wamy.
i am glad that you visited my blog and liked my work! 🙂
likewise thanks for visting my blog and glad you liked one of my posts
my pleasure,i really liked your work!
Liked your blog. Yes losing love is hard and there are no easy way out but to remind ourselves constantly that this too shall pass.
thank you nain.
i am glad you visited my blog.
n agree totally.loosing love is like the worst pain in the world but we can’t stop living but wait for the pain to pass 🙂
Nice post. Keep on writing–it’s lovely to share your thoughts with all of us.
thank you martin.
i am glad that you found my post worthy of reading.
cheers
tanushree
Wow! That post is so emotional! Keep on writing… You will become a GREAT writer and get famous :D. Very worthy of reading.
xoxo Deer
thank you.i am overwhelmed by your kind words.thank you for reading my blog.
cheers
tanushree!
No worries! Just keep on writing! Love to hear more!
thanks!
Awesome …
thank you prashant!
keep reading!
cheers
tanushree
Yeah , I will , Hope u chckd out mine 😉
Wow! What a powerful poetic description! It also brings a smile of gratitude and appreciation as I reflect on the gift of a friend, that supports me in discharging this “thirst” into an oasis. So cool!
thank you for your kind words Grace!
i am glad you liked my post!
keep reading!
cheers
tanushree
Thanks for stopping by and liking my post. Really enjoyed your post. Would like to see more.
Best,
N
thank you for your compliment.!!
cheers
tanushree
no probs!
Namaste! Beautiful, beautiful writing. It takes great courage and strength to write about emotional pain without it dissolving into anger. I am not so strong or courageous, and I dare not tread where you have. I know from experience that it can be difficult to let go of the pain for fear that you are betraying the love you mourn; I know from experience it is possible to let go of the pain and retain the love…just keep putting one foot in front of the other, so to speak (and as my mother used to say to me) – you will get ‘there’ someday. 🙂
Namaste Lyann!
i am overwhelmed by your gesture.i can’ thank you enough for liking my work so much.
i know the pain of separation and yes it’s the toughest phase of one’s life. A person either destroys oneself completely or emerge from the pain and brace the life that lies ahead. I chose to do the latter and i am glad i did that!
thank you so much for reblogging my article!
my first reblogged work!
you are special now!!
cheers
tanushree
Reblogged this on My Latter Half.
Awesome, thank you, we have all been there. You might also enjoy mintonapillow.tumblr.com
hey
thanks!
i know, some time or the other everyone will be there! So keep loving until then.
🙂
cheers
tanushree
This piece really speaks of the torment that lingers for some time, when a relationship is disrupted one way or another.
hi!
It does. I hope nobody goes through that!
Well written. Hope this is not a first hand experience. I have seen people suffering the break up. Keep writing without a break!
Karteek
hi Karteek
Lets say i have seen the pain closely.It’s heart breaking!!
Thank you for your wishes, i wish the same for you 🙂
Pain like that, is unbearable, makes it difficult to breathe, to sleep and does not melt away with time. The only comfort I can give is that it aches less the longer we live. What a beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing and allowing readers to accept that there are others out there in the same boat.
hi Chicana
Your comment makes it apparent that you have suffered this intense pain in life and if i am correct then i wish that you never experience such agony again in life 🙂
Thank you Tanushree for your wishes. Life has been good to me over the years and I’ve learned to let go…as slow as it has been, but I was lucky, blessed even, to have shared the time I had with such a wonderful person.
hi Chicana
i am happy to hear that you are content in your life, i don’t meet a lot many people who are happy with their life, they are cribbing for something or the other. You are a freshie!!
This was beautiful!
i am glad you liked it!
Beautiful. So utterly sad. The joy of someone’s presence now so darkened by their departure
hi John!
Thank you 🙂
I am glad i could make you feel something within!
Hi Tanushree. Very good work indeed. Very good. Well done 🙂
Do you really think that the memories of loved one departs away from our life? just a curiosity otherwise very well written Tanu! God Bless you!
No, I dont think too..it just fades away a little!
No, I dont think so..it just fades away a little!
Just asked as if you said in your beautiful post!
Ohh sorry i didnt read correctly! very well written Writer!
thank you!
Pain emerges writing such beautiful words
love is like the air around us is a dream
enters our body and fills us with life
then leaves has keep flying like dreams
Namaste Tannushree
Thank you for your kind words. Its a very old poem written by me 🙂